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Carlson School of Management is the largest academic unit in the WEC program. Over 1,500 students are enrolled in Bachelor of Science in Business (BSB) programs, a degree that encompasses nine fields. Students take a core business curriculum in their first and second years before moving into their specialized fields.
Carlson students, faculty and professional affiliates all agree that writing is a vital communication skill for effective business professionals. Improved communication in both writing and speaking is one of the school’s four core outcomes for the undergraduate program.
Writing in Carlson School of Management
Although each of The Carlson School of Management’s seven different departments and nine majors has individual writing expectations that are specific to its field, writing in the business professions does share many universal traits. Marketers, accountants, financiers, and managers all need to be able to write clearly, accurately, concisely, and persuasively for professional audiences. They need to be able to effectively use professional formats like email, memos, decks, reports, proposals, graphics, and presentations and have the ability to form and support an argument that caters to the needs of the readers. In A Guide to Plain English Arthur Levitt, the former Chairman of the Securities and Exchange Commission, notes that professional writing “uses words economically and at a level the audience can understand. Its sentence structure is tight. Its tone is welcoming and direct. Its design is visually appealing. A plain English document is easy to read and looks like it’s meant to be read.”
When students, faculty and our business affiliates (a group made up of alumni, recruiters, mentors, and our governing board members) were surveyed regarding their opinions about the most important characteristics of writing across business disciplines, they reported the most important traits of business writing to be: descriptive, analytical, concise, and persuasive.
Writing Abilities Expected of Carlson School of Management Majors
The Carlson School of Management faculty generated the following list in response to the question, “With which writing abilities should students in this unit’s major(s) graduate?”
Carlson faculty agree that graduation-level students in the school's majors should be able to demonstrate the following four clusters of writing abilities:
Write with clarity:
- Articulate a position in a central thesis
- Summarize ideas, texts, or events effectively
- Communicate information using graphics and/or visuals that are appropriate to the audience and content
Write persuasively:
- Employ audience-relevant theories, concepts, data and/or evidence to justify conclusions or recommendations
- Base arguments and conclusions on situational and/or organizational context
- Recognize and addresses counter-arguments or alternatives
Write analytically:
- Identify an organization's key competencies using an analytical framework
- Base analysis on disciplinary theories
Use appropriate languages and formats:
- Organize effectively—put most important arguments first; sequence persuasively
- Write in ways that are designed for easy reading (skimming, headings, bullets)
- Use plain English; avoid unnecessary words
- Use an engaging style
- Use correct grammar, spelling, and mechanics
- Use correct citation formatting to provide source information
Menu of Grading Criteria Used in Carlson School of Management Courses
In addition to developing a menu of grading criteria in rubric form from which Carlson faculty members and instructors can select and adapt items, Carlson faculty members developed a series of guidelines relevant to the development and use of grading rubrics. See both below.
CLARITY
Writing Criteria | Strong | OK | Weak |
---|---|---|---|
1. Articulates a position in a central thesis |
Articulates a well-defined position, purpose, or thesis appropriate for the context and audience |
Articulates a position, purpose, or thesis |
Articulates no position, purpose, or thesis; or it is unclear what the focus of the assignment is |
2. Summarizes ideas, texts, or events effectively |
Summarizes ideas, texts, or events effectively in a complete yet concise way |
Summarizes ideas, texts, or events adequately |
Summarizes ideas, texts, or events inadequately, if at all |
3. Communicates information using graphics and/or visuals that are appropriate to the audience and content |
Tailors visuals to the audience and content | Includes visuals for the audience and content |
Lacks needed visuals, or includes visuals inappropriate for the audience and content |
PERSUASION
Writing Criteria | Strong | OK | Weak |
---|---|---|---|
4. Employs audience-relevant theories and concepts to justify conclusions or recommendations |
Justifies conclusions or findings with concepts and theories that the audience will find compelling and persuasive |
Justifies conclusions or findings with relevant concepts and theories |
Lacks evidence to support conclusions or recommendations, or evidence used is not appropriate for the audience |
5. Employs audience-relevant data and/or evidence to justify conclusions or recommendations |
Justifies conclusions or findings with evidence and/or data that the audience will find compelling and persuasive |
Justifies conclusions or findings with relevant evidence and/or data |
Lacks evidence/data to support conclusions or
|
6. Bases argument and conclusions on situational and/or context | Argument and conclusions demonstrate a sophisticated understanding of the given context | Argument and conclusions demonstrate some understanding of the given context | Argument and conclusions are inappropriate in the given context |
7. Recognizes and addresses risks, counter-arguments, or alternatives when appropriate | Addresses audience appropriate risks, counter-arguments, or alternatives thoroughly | Addresses risks, counter-arguments, or alternatives | Overlooks risks, counter-arguments, and alternatives |
ANALYSIS
Writing Criteria |
Strong | OK | Weak |
---|---|---|---|
8. Addresses key issues using an appropriate analytical framework to support conclusions | Addresses key issues incisively using cogent analytical framework appropriate for the audience and context | Addresses key issues using an appropriate analytical framework | Does not address key issues adequately; lacks an analytical framework, misunderstands that framework, or applies it inappropriately |
9. Bases analysis on disciplinary theories appropriate for the audience and context | Connects deeply with key disciplinary theories and concepts | Employs key disciplinary theories and concepts | Fails to employ key disciplinary theories and concepts, or employs them insufficiently |
LANGUAGE/FORMAT
Writing Criteria | Strong | OK | WEAK |
---|---|---|---|
10. Effectively organized—for the audience and context |
The writer uses an organizational framework that is effective for the given audience and context—the writing is organized in a clear and logical way |
The writer puts most of the most important points and recommendations in the beginning; the organization pattern is mostly effective |
The main points are not given until later in the |
11. Is designed for easy reading (skimming, headings, bullets) | The writer uses an organizational framework that is effective for the given audience and context—the writing is organized in a clear and logical way | The writer uses an organizational framework that is appropriate for the given audience and context | There is no clear organization framework or the organization used is not appropriate for the audience or context; the organizational pattern is confusing |
12. Uses plain English; avoids unnecessary words—is concise | Language is direct, audience appropriate, and concise | Language is mostly concise with minimal use of passive voice or excess verbiage | Passive voice is common, sentences are often wordy, writer rambles |
13. Uses an engaging style | The writing is interesting and audience-focused | The writing is somewhat interesting and audience-focused | The writing is dull; some points may be irrelevant to the audience |
14. Uses an audience-focused, engaging style | The writing is interesting and audience-focused | The writing is somewhat interesting and audience-focused | The writing is dull; some points may be irrelevant to the audience |
15. Uses correct grammar, spelling, and punctuation | No errors | Minimal errors that do not detract from meaning or credibility | Multiple errors that make some sections confusing or hurt the writer's credibility and professionalism |
16. Correctly cites research and source information | Cites all outside information using the correct citation format without errors | Cites all outside information using the correct citation format with minimal errors | Some citations are missing; the citation format is incorrect |
Guidelines for using the rubric/menu
Do:
- Discuss the rubric with students. Help them understand your expectations, and highlight examples of
- “strong,” “acceptable,” and “weak” writing if you can.
- Consider adding student-chosen criteria. Students may have keen insights, so be willing to update or
- negotiate the rubric as needed.
- Make sure that language on the rubric is clear. Rubric language is often abstract, and students may need
- some clarification or rewording.
- Help students use the rubric formatively—planning for their assignment, assessing their efforts so far, and reflecting on feedback.
Don’t:
- Use rubrics exclusively as a summative scoring tool. In other words, don’t use the rubric only to assign a final score.
- Assume that rubrics are always self-explanatory. The more students engage with the rubric, the more effective it will be.
- Overlook possible issues of reliability, equity, and validity. Time will often reveal a rubric’s weaknesses. For instance, the rubric might fail to measure what it was intended to measure, or even disadvantage some students unfairly.
Highlights from the Writing Plan
With its first-edition Writing Plan, Carlson School of Management developed online modules for brief supplemental writing instruction in core courses. The online modules can be used in any course that features student writing. In the second-edition Writing Plan, Carlson faculty began testing a common writing rubric (above) based on faculty-developed assessment criteria specifically targeting writing-intensive capstone courses. Also, Carlson has developed a Writing that Works website of business writing resources including tutorials, Writing podcasts, videos, and links for students and instructors.
Carlson’s third-edition Writing Plan incorporates writing discussions into an ongoing program of lunchtime teaching talks and adds a series of additional writing assessments to better measure students’ growth as writers through the curriculum and into their major tracks.